As the crumbling shadow of the cathedral receded, Layla felt the sticky fingers of humidity enveloping her body. The flooded district's light spilled golden tendrils in the water that lay still at her feet. Her heart thumped wildly, a fierce yet frantic cadence, a conflation of determination and dread.
The revelations of her father's last moments clawed at her soul like a vengeful phantom, the truth scarring her spirit. Betrayed, abandoned, poisoned. Each whisper of memory pulsed with burning pain, and yet, somehow, she welcomed the torment. It hurt, yes; but it brought her closer to the lies untangling Kamal had woven around her family.
The rest of her companions maintained a distracted calm until the silence outside was broken by a gentle hum. "'He's waiting." Serena remarked. Her gaze had been fixed far off, sweeping across the horizon, fixating on the border of Zone Four, where it shimmered faintly in the distance – the boundary between secrets and shadows.
Soft but resolute, Serena continued. "Aidan Rayyan. At the edge."
A gentle nod was all Seleya mustered. The heat burning her desire to vent her anger glared inside like a furnace stoked to raging levels. "I'm ready," she uttered, her expectation ringing hollow in the stale air.
The stillness hung heavy between them, almost talc-like to touch. Further distantly, she could feel the other two women's gaze grazing across her, the resoluteness mixed with sharp vulnerability swimming within rows of silken lashes. How, comforting as it was to sense devotion, feeling heavy underneath ungraspable comfort suffocated her spirit like a creeping vine. She was not free. Serenity deluded her.
The sense of poise water flutter along every inch of her body between making her movements feel ten degrees slower faded unceremoniously; behind the crumbling shadow of ancient stones, it no longer existed. In her thoughts, only fragments of openness persisted, thin like ancient parchment fragility flowing like flaky dust, assuring her senses slipped away assemblage of fetters without conventional shackles she'd tied herself to.
Vitality fused from shimmering grace briefly masked her flesh this time stubbornness served intertwining with arid will and full readiness bristling towards fire coursing through every corner of her body. It coaxed every nerve from bone calm shackles. Something was simmering in deeply stored fire waiting patiently to claim everything that had crossed path at a touch. Brassy light beneath limits she embraced fell reckless, standing ablaze and entrapped.
Facing approach raining storms between drips of wordless thunder would melt like fabric licked by touch of flame forming bonding cascading essence of endless salt brewing precious unguarded essence, feeling only energizing caress without curl of onus until cocoon silk whispers crumbled slowly fell apart world. "For that," she reasoned softly, bracing herself for whatever glanced nearest to the opposite of gentle breeze. ``"A single goal."
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The hoverbikes screeched above her like ghosts as she advanced slowly toward the border. The skeletal remains of what seemed to be a forgotten city lay strewn across broken walls and trees half submerged in thick water. Serina shifted, a quiet anchor amidst the chaos. Layla felt like she was marching towards the border lost in limbs until Serina pointed out not to float away.
No matter how far Layla ran, she was always tethered to Aidan. As the relationship spiraled in circles, she felt like walls were starting to close in on her. For a brief moment while looking towards the fading skyline, she wanted to believe every square inch out there could hold a shard of hope. But Aidan had other plans, whether he was fully aware of them or not at emotionally chaining both of them to a golden cage. Some part of him had single-handedly shifted her view of how magic still existed, and every single thing she did reverberated through the world.
"He's not the man you think he is," Serena said. As Serina uttered those words, the sun took a peek paving the way for burning hot stares. Something about those digits smoothly gliding across the warm sky fueled her attention span more than expected.
"Aidan's been playing a dangerous game for years." Serina fixed her eyes toward the ground while whispering those words glancing for responses. For dark patches of skin that were soaked in darkness with so much brightness lying beneath the surface, she surely hoped those suffocating them could somehow be liberated. Too many unanswered questions throughout the years must have left a mark on every soul brought into this life without asking. In a mere breath she disinfected the space.
"Weapons?" A soft chucking sob escaped as she squinted her eyes. As her blood boiled she slowly previewed forgiveness. The patience inside of her was wearing thin and slowly running out of track so she had to resort those whimpering impulses to words.
A solitary silhouette waited at the border, draped in shadows, but impossible to overlook. Aidan Rayyan stood tall, and his sharp eyes cleaved twilight into two halves. Those slivers of arrogance he customarily carried were softened by something unreadable—regret? Anticipation? Or a dangerously optimistic kind of hope?
This was the man who had betrayed her father and injected venom into their legacy, but paradoxically, he also possessed the key to the vengeance she longed for.
"Layla," Aidan greeted, his voice smooth yet taut. "You've come."
Without flinching, she met his gaze. "I want answers."
He motioned to a rusted out hoverbike several steps away. "Come. We don't have long before Kamal's eyes start watching again."
A chill seeped into her bones as the evening's cold wrapped around her. The low hum of the engine served as a reminder of her fall from grace—and the lengths she was poised to sink to.
Both of them bound by betrayal and fragile alliances fell into silence, lost in thought until Aidan finally broke it.
"Your father was a good man. Too good for the world he lived in."
"Why let him die, then?"
"Because sometimes, to protect the ones you love the most, you have to let go entirely. To become the villain in their story."
Her silence answering was a reply in itself, yet all he said was, "you poisoned him."
Aidan didn't deny it. "Yes, but not out of malice."
"Then why?"
"To keep you alive."
Layla's breath caught. "How?"
"Your father discovered something. Something dangerous. Kamal wanted it too. When your father refused to give it up, he began to threaten severe consequences. I tried to buy time. I offered him a choice: step away from the game and forfeit to save you."
"And the poison?"
"Part of the plan to buy time. To delay Kamal's reach."
"Delay?" With an edge-kissed fury that hazed her voice, she continued, "he died."
Aidan looked away, jaw clenched. "I underestimated the poison's strength. I didn't know it would kill him so quickly."
It was a the weight of the confession pressed down on her chest, mercifully twisted, showed shadows of sacrifice. Cruel in its tenderness.
"What now?" Layla asked, her voice barely rising above a whisper. "You want me to trust you?"
Aidan's focus sharpened. "No. I want you to understand. To see the consequences of your actions."
"Why?"
"Because Kamal isn't simply after your family's wealth. He wants the inheritance — the power your grandfather concealed. The techniques of silat, the codex, everything."
Layla's racing thoughts shifted like tumbling dice. The secrets buried under the flood, the cathedral doors bound in chains, the ancient scripts — all of it hinting toward something far larger, far darker.
"And you want to stop him."
Aidan nodded. "Together."
The word hung thick and heavy in the space between them.
Layla's searching gaze found his, desperate to locate the monster he'd been painted as. Instead, all she found was a man tormented by the ghosts of his own making.
"Why shouldn't I believe you?"
"Because we both want Kamal gone."
Only together could they weather the oncoming storm.
As the hoverbike edged closer to Zone Four's border, the sky split open with distant thunder. Beneath, the water shimmered like a bruised mirror, reflecting a shattered past and foreboding future.
Layla advanced while deep in thought. Her family's past was slowly starting to bleed into her future. Her hands were connected to her fists as she felt the weight of the blood silat box in her bag weighing her down with every step forward.
The
rising tide of vengeance endangers everything in her way should she take a misstep.
To be continued…