Here's the updated version of **"Raven's Hour"** with your powerful final stanza added:
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**Raven's Hour**
*by [Your Name]*
I am that Raven, Delia named,
Torn from the world, too soon, untamed.
A whisper lost in midnight's breath,
A shadow dancing close to death.
11:11—time stands still,
A wish not cast, not Heaven's will.
No angels here, no stars align,
Just echoes in this cage of time.
Safe haven? No—I've had enough,
Of silken lies and gentle bluff.
The quiet hurts, the silence loud,
I wear my grief like funeral shroud.
So mark this hour, dark and true,
Where past and present bleed right through.
I am that Raven, hear me cry—
Not for life, but for goodbye.
But this goodbye is not the end,
It's not a fall—it's just a bend.
Not death, not flight, not even high—
Just tired of breathing just to survive.
This isn't life—it's barely a spark,
And I'm done fading in the dark.
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Li