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Many enemies had started to get scared, and some of them fled while others surrendered. Seeing all this, Sun and the others were happy, but the third man was trying to convince them. However, the remaining enemies who surrendered were not listening to the third man, and Sun and his comrades took advantage of this, capturing many who wouldn't listen and even started killing them. They had now captured a lot of people along with the third man.
Rohan and the others had now finished their respective fights. Now, the battle between Mayur and Puri was also coming to its end. Mayur was almost about to win against Puri because Rohan and many others had come to help him. Sun and the others had already captured everyone.
On the other hand, Madhu's trustworthy guard Raka had taken Mallu to the emperor in the capital city. Raka told Emperor Mohan the entire incident. After hearing everything, the emperor ordered Mallu to be thrown into his prison. Then the emperor quickly sent one of his trusted generals, Nayak, along with some soldiers to help Madhu and the others.
Sun and the rest of the group had now won, and everyone was happy. But an unknown man sitting on the train suddenly fired a gunshot at the sun. Now, Sun had lost consciousness, and no one could understand what had just happened. The sun was happy with us moments ago. And now, where did this bullet come from, and where did it go?
All the unknown men got off the train, and they started attacking the soldier. After Sun was shot, Rohan and Prerna couldn't understand what was happening. Madhu tried to take care of Prerna, and Mayur tried to manage Rohan. Rohan managed to compose himself, but Prerna became very angry and started attacking him brutally in a fit of rage. After a lot of difficulty, Rohan was able to calm Prerna down. And Madhu gave Sun an expensive healing potion, which didn't fully cure him but did improve his condition a little. Meanwhile, all the unknown men saved the third man, and the remaining enemies had fled. This was a failure for Mayur and the others, but they weren't completely defeated because Mallu was still with their emperor. After some time, the emperor's men arrived and took control of the situation.
Sun was then taken to a top doctor. Prerna asked the doctor, "Doctor, what happened to Sun? Is he okay now?" The doctor replied, "There's nothing to worry about. The sun is fine now. He wasn't hurt in any dangerous area; it will just take him a day or two to recover and start moving again. He'll get better by following the doctor's advice."
Madhu came to Rohan and said, "You don't need to worry anymore. We will handle Mallu and that man from here on. Tell Sun not to worry; she will take care of everything. You just take care of your health. You should focus on your health. The Emperor is paying attention to you because you helped catch Mallu and provided information about those people. That's why the Emperor will reward Sun and the others. Once Sun recovers, tell him the Emperor wants to meet him." Then Madhu set off for the capital city.